Working on Favor of Athena pages 27 and 28

Working on Favor of Athena pages 27 and 28

Working on Favor of Athena pages 27 and 28

Save the Cat: We are now in the Fun & Games part of the script.  This scene is inspired by Men in Black when Kay and Jay meet up with Mr. and Mrs. Redgick (who is about to give birth). The difference is I have to split up the cast so they each have their own paranormal experience. 

The conflict of the scene is that the mortals still don’t trust Athena because they don’t know what the marks on their skin mean. 

The emotional change occurs when the mortals decide to follow her orders (hope) to find the spirit of their dead friend., despite starting off being angry.

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